Summer Haiku poem
The sunshine is here
the warm breeze is all you need
relax at the beach
Haiku poetry is when you only use 3 lines.
It is laid out like this.
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
so i hope you know more about Haiku poetry then be for.
Well done Shontai! You wrote a lovely haiku and it was good to see you enjoy it so much. Remember to proofread your writing before you post. Lovely picture of the beach - it fits well with your haiku.
ReplyDeleteHi Shontai!
ReplyDeleteIt's Jhrnylle here. I really like how you added a picture at the end. It makes your blog more interesting.
Maybe next time you should start by telling the readers what you are doing so the readers won't be confused. Maybe you could also add more details about the Haiku Poem like what is the meaning of Haiku Poem.
Your peom does make sense and its powerful. Can you make a Haiku Poem about winter?
I'll be looking forward to answer my questions. And I did learn something new today. Have a great day, Bye!
Kind Regards,
Jhrnylle
i am making a haiku poem now and yes i can make a winter poem and thank you for reading my poem
DeleteHello Shontai!
ReplyDeleteThe Haiku poem that you made is actually true. When you go to the beach you could feel the warm breeze when it's summer time.
I really like how you show how it's laid out. Maybe next time, explain more about the haiku poem.
The picture of the beach you put there matched your peom, which is really great!
I'd love to see more of your posts!
Bye!
thank you for reading my poem and i will explain my poems more let me know if you want to know what i was going for thank you
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