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Thursday, May 7, 2020

writing

today I am go to show you some of my writing we get to do some writing and this is my story.
its about a boy who thinks he is dead and there is a big  twist at the end 


The time was 1:30pm i’m still in school waiting to leave. I started to go to sleep and here I am in a place, I have never been here. But I feel like I have but why? I start to think why am I here and have I died? No. I feel like I'm dead. I’m thinking that it is all just a dream I start to think to myself. Am i dreaming? Then the ball rings so it was just a dream. But it doesn't feel like it. Anyways, I’m Matt and I always feel  like i’m dead and my so-called friends don't think i’m telling the truth. So I talk to my mum. Her name is Maya and my dad Tim. They were just thinking it’s just my imagination. So now I’m going to the counsellor then I started to meet some new friends. One is Max. He is my best friend and my first friend. so i go to his house because Max said that he has the same thing but i think he is just saying that to make me feel better. so we both wanted to sleep at my house but my family is how I say this Evil. so they both love taking things and good guys keep being nice to me but not my mum and dad. They once wanted me to come with them but i can't because my mum said if i go then i'm not there kid. So I stayed with my mum and dad for now.
i'm going to my friend's house right now so I can't talk.

3 hours later

i'm at my friends house but i'm in the bathroom so he can't hear me 
He hates it when I talk to myself and do some writing at the same time. it's him i need to leave the bathroom.


10 minutes later 

The door slowly starts to creek and open. it's him i start thinking is he my real friend he can't stop looking at me wherever i go he goes i don't like it so i start talking to him.
i ask him are you watching m... he said interrupting me can we get some food? I said sure. not like i know anything he said back to me. Why did he say that? so we want to go get food. We are sleeping in a different room. so STAY OUT OF MY ROOM!! OK OK i will why can't we be in your room. sorry my.... mum she ..... uhmm dad.. is in there yea dad in there that why. uhmm ok can we go to the room we are sleeping in. max said yes we can sleep in here. I say ok that fine i went to sleep and i found out that i can fly no i can't fly that not right people can't fly. i start thinking am i a person yes my mum and dad are people so i am a person. But that was wrong. I'm not a person because my mum and dad are Evil and people want to take me and max he won't let me in his room! so he's not my friend. so i tell max that i don't feel good he said that i had to stay the night because his mum and dad are asleep. I said can you wake them up. no said max they will get mad at me sorry said max. I said ok. so when max went to sleep I went to his room his dad was not there so I looked around his room for his dad. I couldn't see anything so I went to his mum's room and the mum and dad where not there. I looked for them so I could go home but they are nowhere. so i just go back to bed and wait until the morning. Max came in and said WAKE UP! i said uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh max said shhhhhhh my mum will think i did something to you i said ok again can i go home now i said in a mad voice max said ok ok let's go. I started thinking, are we going home for real or is he lying but we did go home. i Tall my mum everything that happened

the next day

So I go to school the next day and I was just trying to stay away from Max but I couldn't because he was my best friend. So I went to play with him. and he wanted me to come back to his house but there was no way i'm going back into his house again.so i said to max sorry not today i have to go home for my mum and dads friends house. Max said no, come with me. so max took me to his home. and the people who were being nice to me were here. they said we know you are Matt and that you have a dream that you always die.
because we are your real mum and dad.
and max is your brother. the people who said there your mum and dad they are Evil they wanted you because of your power. My powers i don't have any powers if i did then i would know right. no said the nice man we all have powers. max has power i have powers and your real mum has powers.
this is not right your not my mum and or brother and you never will be! i don't know what they were thinking. I'm not their kid.

1am they came to my room and took me. They are my mum, dad and brother. Why would Max take me like that if I'm not his brother?




the next thing i know my clock went off i think it was all a dream. my mum was not called Maya and my dad was not called Tim and i do have a brother but not one called max. so it was all a dream. from the corner of my eyes i can see max Maya Tim and the nice people but i don't know the nice peoples name. I thought that they said bye to me. like they are real. but i didn't care. I was just happy to be home.

THE END



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